Yes. When Silas first takes you to the admin office there is narration that states which order is the correct order (in reverse). If you navigate successfully, you will meet Reth first, if you navigate incorrectly you will meet Orion first. Depending on who you meet first, the dialog can change slightly.
Hey I tried the demo and loved it, literally want to romance all of the characters (which is rare as usually I only go for like 2 out of the possible characters) I think the story is great and I cant wait for next part :)
Does the class you choose depict who you are going to be with? For example if you chose the mage class would you be with Silas? Or could you choose fighter and still be with Silas?
Depending on the class you choose you'll spend more time with characters of the same class, but my goal is to not restrict who you can choose to romance based on your class.
Hello! How about you? :) Hope you're feel great :3
Soo... I ended play to the "When stars fall" a few minutes ago and what I want to say about this one: it's amaizing! Arts, music, backgrounds and (the main) a story are perfect. I haven't words to say what I felt when I was playing (bacause of I don't good in this arts, heh-heh :p), but whatever it's a wonderful game which have a potentional! I'll follow. (Wait a minute: I already following!) So this isn't a reason to discussion.
Amnesia (or some kind of losing memory I don't know what with him exactly) adds mystic in the game. You know how to intrigue, did you know about that?:D
Also I note major choosing. It's looks like if you're choose class of hero of some kind of action-game or RPG. And this combination with VN is pretty interesting turn from you. I like it :3
So, in the end of my comment I want to say that I wish you exceptionally the best mood that would help you with your work on this game.
Thank you for your attention!
P.S.
Here I want to say that I so sorry about my English because of English isn't my native language (and this fact do this language so hard to me :p).
And, Author, what do you do with me? I can't choose between Silas and Orion... And I want to kick Reth's butt:D
(And also I found one mistake: "forgoe", but it's not matter :3)
Thank you so much for taking the time to play and leave such great feedback! I really appreciate it. I definitely wanted to branch away from the "normal" feel of a VN at least slightly in some areas to add something extra and enjoyable. Plus, I personally enjoy stories with some mysteries to figure out and ones that keep me guessing so I wanted to incorporate that into this story as well.
Thank you as well for mentioning the error. I'll add it to my to do list for the next update. :D
Wow! Does this mean you have some plans to add something like that in the WSF? If yes, this game will be my favorite!:D
But, what you finally add your ideas, please don't forget add Marcus a notebook (quest log) when he'll takes notes what he should do. It will be so useful especially if you're not good in English... (I hope you're understand about what I trying to say. And I sorry if you find my words rude)
You're doing great :) I do have plans to add a questing/job aspect to the game later. It won't be entirely RPG, but there will be some aspects of that. At the early stages I don't know that it will be implemented much, but I have some of the screens already in reserve for when I'll be able to add it in game.
I really couldn't find the word to describe this. It's still a demo, but I can see the thoughts put on it. It's really great and outstanding. It got me hooked almost instantly. I want more!
Oh and at first Silas got me hooked, but then I met Orion and now I love him because we both like quietness xD
"also someone needs to spank Reth" HAHAHA! Thank you for the kind words! I'm really glad people are enjoying the game and that each character is resonating with players in different ways.
I can look into a possible toggle setting for it if that's a possible thing that can be done. Otherwise the portrait is tied to the character speaking. The only way to hide it would be to hide the whole textbox with the default "H" key (on PC at least, not sure if it's the same key on mac off the top of my head).
This VN is simply amazing. I love the field and the field music is catchy and peaceful. I look forward to future updates like the MC facial customization. The rpg stuff is good. Silas is my only favorite and I can't wait to see more of him. Keep up the good work!
Thank you so much! The assets for the customization will likely be one of the last out of the current characters atm, but it is definitely my goal to have the MC be customizable to some degree with visuals. I'm glad to hear you like Silas as well, he's a fun character to write and see come to life.
Hey did you know that there's a furry VN discord server. I think it would be a good idea to join since a lot of people there have experience with Ren'py. They can help if you have any questions and also the server is a good way to get more publicity and feedback. You could also stream while your working on the game and those who watch can offer advice if you run into any problems. I'll leave the discord link here if you're interested.https://discord.gg/fvn
Really impressed by this first demo, it's quite meaty and really hooked me in! After having done only one run through I'd say Silas is the best boy pick for the moment, but I'm enjoying all of the cast so far and really wanna see where this all leads to. Keep it up, there's a lot of promise here!
Thank you so much for playing! Yes, Qrom will be a romanceable character and he should have more content in future updates. I'm mostly just waiting to commission his art assets before fully delving into his character.
Can't wait to see more of him! Is there a way to make Reth become less of a jerk and possibly make him start to like the MC? I like a lot Hyenas, however he's quite harsh to the poor MC...
Maybe he's just got a rough exterior and is sweet on the inside or maybe he's just a jerk lol, but as the game progresses there will be more opportunities to learn about Reth and possibly change his attitude toward the MC.
Thank you for checking it out! I'm still new to Ren'py and haven't been able to get the Android version to function yet, but it is in my plans to eventually have the game be available on the Android platform once I can get all the kinks worked out.
Holy cow, just finished the demo and dang is it enthralling, great work. It's very rare that a new and early demo, especially a vn, draws me in soo strongly, I wanted more!!!! which is a good thing!!!. You did great, this was amazing and I cant wait for an update, :D
Thank you so much! I'm really happy you enjoyed it! Hopefully the next update won't take too long, but I want to make sure there is enough content and new features before releasing a version 0.2 to you guys.
It's a fairly early WIP demo, bound to be some dead ends or unfinished untouched stuff, or paths just not fleshed out yet, just try a different class for now, After that point the end of the demo is pretty soon so just make sure to save that choice scene for later. Hopefully there will be a skip and rewind function for future replays, :3
Thank you for the feedback! Ren'py does have built in skip and rollback functions available in game (I'll still be exploring ways to possibly enhance or utilize them). However, the first few updates will likely require a restart due to the nature of the program with adding new assets and variables for those assets. Once the majority of the assets are added, then hopefully the content will be playable from the last saved spot each update.
Hello, thank you for playing! Sanctioned13 is correct. Both the Guardian(shield) and Holy Arts(amulet) options are unavailable in the current build so I left them unclickable. In the next update at least Guardian should be available, but I'll also make sure that I add something in game that states what is unavailable.
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Yo, i just finished the demo and it was amaizing, please keep up the good work im looking foward to see more of this fantastic world you are creating.
Also Silas was my favorite i hope he gets an amaizing route.
Thank you! I will do my best! :D
Does choosing right, forward, or left do anything in the hallway scene?
Yes. When Silas first takes you to the admin office there is narration that states which order is the correct order (in reverse). If you navigate successfully, you will meet Reth first, if you navigate incorrectly you will meet Orion first. Depending on who you meet first, the dialog can change slightly.
Hey I tried the demo and loved it, literally want to romance all of the characters (which is rare as usually I only go for like 2 out of the possible characters) I think the story is great and I cant wait for next part :)
Thanks so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far!
Does the class you choose depict who you are going to be with? For example if you chose the mage class would you be with Silas? Or could you choose fighter and still be with Silas?
Depending on the class you choose you'll spend more time with characters of the same class, but my goal is to not restrict who you can choose to romance based on your class.
k thanks for the info.
I'm excited to see what the next update will bring! Easily rated it 5 stars.
Thank you so much! Hopefully the next one brings lots of quality content lol
Hello! How about you? :) Hope you're feel great :3
Soo... I ended play to the "When stars fall" a few minutes ago and what I want to say about this one: it's amaizing! Arts, music, backgrounds and (the main) a story are perfect. I haven't words to say what I felt when I was playing (bacause of I don't good in this arts, heh-heh :p), but whatever it's a wonderful game which have a potentional! I'll follow. (Wait a minute: I already following!) So this isn't a reason to discussion.
Amnesia (or some kind of losing memory I don't know what with him exactly) adds mystic in the game. You know how to intrigue, did you know about that?:D
Also I note major choosing. It's looks like if you're choose class of hero of some kind of action-game or RPG. And this combination with VN is pretty interesting turn from you. I like it :3
So, in the end of my comment I want to say that I wish you exceptionally the best mood that would help you with your work on this game.
Thank you for your attention!
P.S.
Here I want to say that I so sorry about my English because of English isn't my native language (and this fact do this language so hard to me :p).
And, Author, what do you do with me? I can't choose between Silas and Orion... And I want to kick Reth's butt:D
(And also I found one mistake: "forgoe", but it's not matter :3)
Thank you so much for taking the time to play and leave such great feedback! I really appreciate it. I definitely wanted to branch away from the "normal" feel of a VN at least slightly in some areas to add something extra and enjoyable. Plus, I personally enjoy stories with some mysteries to figure out and ones that keep me guessing so I wanted to incorporate that into this story as well.
Thank you as well for mentioning the error. I'll add it to my to do list for the next update. :D
Wow! Does this mean you have some plans to add something like that in the WSF? If yes, this game will be my favorite!:D
But, what you finally add your ideas, please don't forget add Marcus a notebook (quest log) when he'll takes notes what he should do. It will be so useful especially if you're not good in English...
(I hope you're understand about what I trying to say. And I sorry if you find my words rude)Have a nice day ;3
You're doing great :)
I do have plans to add a questing/job aspect to the game later. It won't be entirely RPG, but there will be some aspects of that. At the early stages I don't know that it will be implemented much, but I have some of the screens already in reserve for when I'll be able to add it in game.
I really couldn't find the word to describe this. It's still a demo, but I can see the thoughts put on it. It's really great and outstanding. It got me hooked almost instantly. I want more!
Oh and at first Silas got me hooked, but then I met Orion and now I love him because we both like quietness xD
also someone needs to spank Reth
"also someone needs to spank Reth"
HAHAHA!
Thank you for the kind words! I'm really glad people are enjoying the game and that each character is resonating with players in different ways.
Amazing demo! and the fox got me hooked.
Thank you! Lol, yes, he does seem to be a crowd pleaser.
I have one question! In future update, can we hide MC's portrait in dialoge?
I can look into a possible toggle setting for it if that's a possible thing that can be done. Otherwise the portrait is tied to the character speaking. The only way to hide it would be to hide the whole textbox with the default "H" key (on PC at least, not sure if it's the same key on mac off the top of my head).
bloody amazing VN. hooked and impatiently waiting for more.
Thank you so much! I hope the next update won't take too long. :)
This VN is simply amazing. I love the field and the field music is catchy and peaceful. I look forward to future updates like the MC facial customization. The rpg stuff is good. Silas is my only favorite and I can't wait to see more of him. Keep up the good work!
Thank you so much! The assets for the customization will likely be one of the last out of the current characters atm, but it is definitely my goal to have the MC be customizable to some degree with visuals. I'm glad to hear you like Silas as well, he's a fun character to write and see come to life.
Aww, thank you so much! It means a lot! 😊
Hey did you know that there's a furry VN discord server. I think it would be a good idea to join since a lot of people there have experience with Ren'py. They can help if you have any questions and also the server is a good way to get more publicity and feedback. You could also stream while your working on the game and those who watch can offer advice if you run into any problems. I'll leave the discord link here if you're interested.https://discord.gg/fvn
Oh I almost forgot. I think you need to be 18+ to join. I could be wrong, but check the rules just in case.
Thank you very much, I've heard rumors of such server, but never looked for it lol. I really appreciate it.
No prob. Looking forward to how this project will turn out. ;)
Really impressed by this first demo, it's quite meaty and really hooked me in! After having done only one run through I'd say Silas is the best boy pick for the moment, but I'm enjoying all of the cast so far and really wanna see where this all leads to. Keep it up, there's a lot of promise here!
Thank you so much for playing and for the kind words! I'm really glad that other people are enjoying the characters as much as I enjoy writing them.
D'aww, stop it you... lol
Seriously though, thank you for the kind words and support!
I have a question, will Qrom be a love interest/romance option? I see the potential there...
Thank you so much for playing! Yes, Qrom will be a romanceable character and he should have more content in future updates. I'm mostly just waiting to commission his art assets before fully delving into his character.
Can't wait to see more of him! Is there a way to make Reth become less of a jerk and possibly make him start to like the MC? I like a lot Hyenas, however he's quite harsh to the poor MC...
Maybe he's just got a rough exterior and is sweet on the inside or maybe he's just a jerk lol, but as the game progresses there will be more opportunities to learn about Reth and possibly change his attitude toward the MC.
I want to Android download it game pls, thank you
Thank you for checking it out! I'm still new to Ren'py and haven't been able to get the Android version to function yet, but it is in my plans to eventually have the game be available on the Android platform once I can get all the kinks worked out.
I can wait it can Android download
Holy cow, just finished the demo and dang is it enthralling, great work. It's very rare that a new and early demo, especially a vn, draws me in soo strongly, I wanted more!!!! which is a good thing!!!. You did great, this was amazing and I cant wait for an update, :D
Thank you so much! I'm really happy you enjoyed it! Hopefully the next update won't take too long, but I want to make sure there is enough content and new features before releasing a version 0.2 to you guys.
I reached the part where you select your class but can't pick Cleric (or the holy arts unsure) is it not ready yet or did I mess up somewhere.
It's a fairly early WIP demo, bound to be some dead ends or unfinished untouched stuff, or paths just not fleshed out yet, just try a different class for now, After that point the end of the demo is pretty soon so just make sure to save that choice scene for later. Hopefully there will be a skip and rewind function for future replays, :3
Thank you for the feedback! Ren'py does have built in skip and rollback functions available in game (I'll still be exploring ways to possibly enhance or utilize them). However, the first few updates will likely require a restart due to the nature of the program with adding new assets and variables for those assets. Once the majority of the assets are added, then hopefully the content will be playable from the last saved spot each update.
Take your time. We are all happy about this game. But take the time that u really need or want to use. Don't overwork... Andany other things ^^
Hello, thank you for playing! Sanctioned13 is correct. Both the Guardian(shield) and Holy Arts(amulet) options are unavailable in the current build so I left them unclickable. In the next update at least Guardian should be available, but I'll also make sure that I add something in game that states what is unavailable.